Fish is the hardest animal to take care
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I think fish is the hardest pet to care.I\'ll cite two reason why fish is the hardest pet to care.
1. I have to change the water often. I have to spend lots of money and I\'ll be very tiring.
2. i have to keep them like take care of them to do not fight, feed them properly everyday.
But I think, all pets need love, responsibility, and effort. It\'s necessary spirit people who care about pets have to have.
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I think fish is the hardest pet to care.
>> I think fish are the hardest pets to take care of.
I\'ll cite two reason why fish is the hardest pet to care.
>> I\'ll cite two reasons why.
1. I have to change the water often. I have to spend lots of money and I\'ll be very tiring.
>> First, I have to spend lots of money, and I have to change the water often so I\'ll be very tired.
2. i have to keep them like take care of them to do not fight, feed them properly everyday.
>> Second, I have to prevent them from fighting and feed them properly everyday.
But I think, all pets need love, responsibility, and effort.
>> However, I think all pets need love. We should be responsible and make an effort in taking care of them.
It\'s necessary spirit people who care about pets have to have.
>> It\'s necessary to encourage people who care about pets to have one.
Hi, Daniel! I think you\'ll be a responsible pet owner. I hope your mom allows you to have a pet.
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