Fishing is important industry.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. Fishing is an important industry in Korea. This is because Korea is surrounded by the sea on three sides. Because it is surrounded by sea on three sides, it is inevitable that the fishing industry will develop. And there are many fish foods in our country.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for the composition.
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~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. Fishing is an important industry in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
This is because Korea is surrounded by the sea on three sides.
>>> CORRECT!
Because it is surrounded by sea on three sides, it is inevitable that the fishing industry will develop.
>>> CORRECT!
And there are many fish foods in our country.
>>> CORRECT!
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