fitness plan
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I would recommend walking.
There is no need to prepare and it,s easy to get started
He hates exercise so much, so it,s good to do simple and easy exercise.
There is a really important thing, which is losing weight, quitting smoking, drinking less.
But it,s too difficult to follow
I want to tell him to do something small before it,s too late.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]! You are very diligent and I am sure it will pay off sometime. Keep it up! You did great. ~ T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> First of all, I would recommend him to do walking.
>> Walking doesn\'t need to have much preparation and it\'s easy to start.
>> He hates exercises so it\'s good for him to do simple and easy exercises.
>> He also needs to do important things such as, losing weight, quit smoking, and drinking less liquor.
>> But, it\'s too difficult to achieve.
>> I want to tell him to do something before it\'s too late.
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