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I'll Tell you about my 2013 plans. First, each band 6.0 IELTS academy three months after getting points first. I quit my job for this score, so desperately now. Because if I get this score I can go to Australian immigration next year and I want to meet my Australian friends. Second, I want to my kind of lovely baby. This wish is My wife's wish too. When I watched smile baby face make me happy. So I have a plan got a baby this year. Third, I'll make more powerful concentrate mind. I always lost a little bit my memories so when I work very hard. So I have to fix my bad habit. Fourth, I'll going to abroad travel with my father, mother and my wife. Mayby I'll going to Vietnam or Philippines. If I get a IELTS 6.0 I can go there. Actually We didn't have any summer vacations, we hope so this. Another reason is we like all Southeast Asia countires.

Brian, Thank you very much for your hard work in studying English with me. I will do my very best to help you. Please have time to read my corrections. I will send you the speech tomorrow. See you! T. Sheela I\'ll Tell you about my 2013 plans. >> I\'ll tell you about my plans this 2013.First, each band 6.0 IELTS academy three months after getting points first. >>First, I should atleast get a 6.0 score from each band from IELTS for three months. I quit my job for this score, so desperately now. >> I quit my job for this score so I desperately needed it. Because if I get this score I can go to Australian immigration next year and I want to meet my Australian friends. >>Because If I get this score, I can go to Australia and migrate there next year. I want to meet my Australian friends.Second, I want to my kind of lovely baby. >> Second, I want to have my own lovely baby. This wish is My wife\'s wish too. >> This is my wife\'s wish too. When I watched smile baby face make me happy. So I have a plan got a baby this year. >> When I watched a baby\'s smile,it makes me happy. So, I plan to have a baby this year.Third, I\'ll make more powerful concentrate mind. >> Third, I\'ll concentrate even more. I always lost a little bit my memories so when I work very hard. So I have to fix my bad habit. >> I always lost my concentration when I work very hard. So, I have to fix my bad habit. >>OR: I usually forget some informations when I work very hard. So, I need to get over from this bad habit.Fourth, I\'ll going to abroad travel with my father, mother and my wife. >> Fourth, I will travel abroad with my father, mother and wife. Mayby I\'ll going to Vietnam or Philippines. >> I might go to Vietnam or Philippines. If I get a IELTS 6.0 I can go there. >>If I get a score of 6.0 from IELTS, I can go there.Actually We didn\'t have any summer vacations, we hope so this. >> We hope this thing to happen because we didn\'t have any summer vacation. Another reason is we like all Southeast Asia countires. >> Another reason is that we like all Southeast Asian countries.