Five strange fruits
학생이 쓴 원문
1st Starfruit: If you cut it in hallf, I shrinks until it forms a star shape. 2nd Jellyfruit: If you take a bite out of one, the fruits turns into jelly. 3rd Eclipse palm: This palm grows only in eclipse time. 4th Cursing Lillies: This lillies grow in alcoholic beverages, and acohol drinkers only eat it. 5th dream mango: The dream mangos make your dream pure that day.
강사 첨삭
Hello Heather, wonderful day to you. These fruits are fascinating. I wonder what they taste like. Let\'s talk more about them in class. I will see you then. Take care!~ T. Lyn
1st Starfruit: If you cut it in hallf, I shrinks until it forms a star shape.
>>The first strange fruit that I will share is called the starfruit and when it is cut in half it forms like a star.
2nd Jellyfruit: If you take a bite out of one, the fruits turns into jelly.
>>The second fruit is called jellyfruit that turns jelly when you take a bite of it.
3rd Eclipse palm: This palm grows only in eclipse time.
>>The third fruit is called eclipse palm that grows only during eclipse.
4th Cursing Lillies: This lillies grow in alcoholic beverages, and acohol drinkers only eat it.
>>The fourth fruit is called cursing lily that grows using alcoholic beverages and only alcohol drinkers eat it.
5th dream mango: The dream mangos make your dream pure that day.
>>Lastly the dream mango that make your dream real on that day.
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