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학생이 쓴 원문
i read three times a book that the title is Talmud a week ago.
when i was in high school during English class.
i really hated English at that time.
i went to church since i read the book.
i had illusion about church and i went there.
first,at the conclusion to describe,Never go there.
i had gone church for seven years.
i felt alot of things in the church.
i went there like mad person,
so i was in charge of University Club Boss.
i spended day by day,i thought it's the the most dangerous.my university religious assistant changed,when i was 21.he was some weird,
he liked girls and had appetite and heavy body.
i understood about that, but i thought the man will become minister and speechify it stated my doubt.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
Thank you for sharing this story to me. There are some questions I have in my mind. I'll ask you about them in the class. See you!
Enjoy your day!
-Verna-
i read three times a book that the title is Talmud a week ago.
>>I read the book entitled 'Talmud' three times a week ago.when i was in high school during English class.i really hated English at that time.
>>When I was in high school, I really hated English.I went to church since I read the book.
>>Correct
>> Since I read that book, I started to go to church.i had illusion about church and i went there.
>>I had a dream about the church so I went there.first,at the conclusion to describe,Never go there.
>>At first and at the conclusion of the description, it said never go there.i had gone church for seven years.
>>I have gone to church for seven years.I felt alot of things in the church.
>>Correcti went there like mad person, so i was in charge of University Club Boss.
>>Correcti spended day by day,i thought it's the the most dangerous.
>>As I spent my days there, i thought it was dangerous.My university religious assistant changed,when i was 21.
>>Correcthe was some weird,he liked girls and had appetite and heavy body.
>>He was kind of weird. He liked girls and had a good appetite and heavy body.
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