Fix the coumpeter

2016-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

I fixed the coumpter today.My fater gave a new computer to his friend and the new computer is really fast.The computer is post office computer.I was very sick on Thursday night.And I slept at six.I caught a cold for many days.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

How are you today?

I hope you are feeling good.

By the way, before our class, make sure that your computer is set to avoid

delays.

Also, take good care of your health. Remember, health is wealth. :)

See you. :)


~~ Teacher Kris


I fixed the coumpter today.

>> Correct

My fater gave a new computer to his friend and the new computer is really fast.

>> My father gave his friend a new computer which is new and it functions fast.

The computer is post office computer.

>> The computer is for the office use.

I was very sick on Thursday night.

>> Correct

And I slept at six.

>> Correct

I caught a cold for many days.

>> Correct

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