\"Flipped\" was the best movie !
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I have watched a lot of movies. There are lots of great movies, so I can\'t choose just one !
But one of the most impressive movies is \"Flipped\" I can\'t remember the story about it exactly but I\'m sure that it made me impressed...I can remember the feeling that I felt in the movie. It makes me feel warm and pure...
In a different sense, I like another movie,\"She\'s the man\". It is high-teen movie. I like the actors in the movie, Channing Tatum and Amanda Bynes. It is just entertaining. we can watch the movie without seriousness.
It makes me smile :) I watched it more than 30 times. I can memorize lines...
If you have enough time, I recommend that you try that moives :)
Hi, Teacher Gina ♥ Happy friday !
I\'m sorry but I have an appointment today ㅜ^ㅜ I might get back home late. so I changed today class time.
we can meet next monday :) I hope you have a nice weekend.
always Thanks for your passionate class ! ^^ See you next monday.
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Hello, [이름]!
Happy Friday.
Thank you for submitting your homework. I really appreciate it.
Don\'t worry, it\'s fine. I understand that you can\'t have the class with me today.
See you on Monday and have a wonderful weekend as well.
Always take care! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I have seen a lot of great movies so it\'s hard to choose only one.
But one of the most impressive movies is \"Flipped\"
But one of the most impressive movies is \"Flipped\"
>> CORRECT.
I can\'t remember the story about it exactly but I\'m sure that it made me impressed.
>> CORRECT.
I can remember the feeling that I felt in the movie.
>> CORRECT.
It makes me feel warm and pure.
>> It made me feel warm and pure.
In a different sense, I like another movie,\"She\'s the man\".
In a different sense, I like another movie,\"She\'s the man\".
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I also like another movie which title was \"She\'s the Man.\"
It is high-teen movie.
>> It is a high-teen movie.
I like the actors in the movie, Channing Tatum and Amanda Bynes.
>>CORRECT.
It is just entertaining. We can watch the movie without seriousness.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It is just entertaining and we can easily watch it without being serious.
It makes me smile :)
It makes me smile :)
>> CORRECT.
I watched it more than 30 times.
>> CORRECT.
I can memorize lines...
>> I was even able to memorize the lines.
If you have enough time, I recommend that you try that moives :)
If you have enough time, I recommend that you try that moives :)
>> If you have enough time, I recommend that you try those movies :)
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