Flow of Choice to Story and Spirit

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Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I had a lot of choices for past 18 years, and my eyesight of values have also changed many times as well.

>> I had a lot of choices for past the 18 years, and my eyesight of values have also changed many times as well.
Usually my instinct helped a lot for those choices.

>> Usually, my instinct helped a lot in those choices.
This still has big role, but I got more things that influence me as time gone by.

>> This still has big role, but I got more things that influence me as time goes by.
One of the major is \'Value as a Contents\'. 

>> One of the major one is \'Value as a Contents\'. 

I get interested in story and the knowledge behind them.

>> I get interested in the story and the knowledge behind them.
Therefore, I choose the one with the spiritual value.

>> CORRECT!