Flower

2012-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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*** What is your favorite flower and why? "cherry blossoms" Because it was fantastic when i was walk between the cherry blossoms!! And i like thats pink white (&^^&)

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Howdy, [이름]! Thank you for making your homework. I hope that you will continue writing on your composition board. Cherry blossom is indeed an attractive flower.   I made some corrections on your sentences below. Please take a look and study:   *** What is your favorite flower and why? >> Correct! :)\"cherry blossoms\" >> I like cherry blossoms. (Sentence Construction)Because it was fantastic when i was walk between the cherry blossoms!! >> It\'s because it looks fantastic when I walk in between cherry blossom trees! (Sentence Construction)And i like thats pink white (&^^&) >>I also like its pink and white color. (Sentence Construction)

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