FLU SHOT
학생이 쓴 원문
i got flue shot yesterday.
So, i have a headache all day long.
i feel going to home quickly and take a rest.
it's already 6:40PM.
Normal quitting time of my office is 6PM.
but nobody can get off work on time because of we have to walk on eggshells of boss. i really hate this situation.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
How are you now?
Are you feeling better?
I hope that you are.
Anyway, take a rest when you need to.
I am going to call you again later.
Enjoy the rest of your evening.
~Teacher Chloe
i got flue shot yesterday.
>>I got a flu shot yesterday.
OR:>>I had a flu shot yesterday. So, i have a headache all day long.>>So, I had a headache all day long.
OR:
>>So, I suffered from headache all day long.
i feel going to home quickly and take a rest.
>>I felt like going home quickly and took a rest. it\'s already 6:40PM.
>>It\'s already 6:40PM. Normal quitting time of my office is 6PM.
>>I normally leave the office at 6PM. but nobody can get off work on time because of we have to walk on eggshells of boss.
>>All employees cannot leave the office on time because we have to walk on eggshells of our boss.
i really hate this situation.
>>I really hate this situation.
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