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학생이 쓴 원문
It is delemma tat instant food is delicious and preference is high.
My husband also like to eat ramen 2-3 times a week.
I just advise him not to increasw eating frequency.
I try not to eat instant food because taste of it is strong and salty.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Instant food especially ramen is so common these days because it is convenient and it can really satisfy one\'s tummy. However, it doesn\'t have any nutritional value.
Talk to you later.
Aki~
It is delemma tat instant food is delicious and preference is high.
>>> It is a dilemma that instant food is delicious and the preference is high.
My husband also likes to eat ramen 2-3 times a week.
>> CORRECT!
I just advise him not to increase eating frequency.
>> I just advise him to eat moderately.
I try not to eat instant food because taste of it is strong and salty.
>>> I try not to eat instant food because the taste of it is strong and salty.
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