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I don\'r recommend Soy bean paste soup.
It is a kind of fermentation food like Japanese food Natto.
It\'s a very beneficial to our health but smell is too strong like European cheese.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
I appreciate your honesty and your concern for foreigners. Unlike other people, they would recommend those kinds of food to challenge them.
Thank you for this and I enjoy speaking with you.
Aki~
I don\'t recommend soybean paste soup.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I won\'t be recommending the soybean paste soup.
It is a kind of fermentation food like Japanese food Natto.
>>> It is a kind of fermented food like the Japanese food Natto.
It\'s a very beneficial to our health but smell is too strong like European cheese.
>>> It\'s very beneficial to our health but the smell is too strong like European cheese.
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