food
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I am very sad alot of leftover food at lunch time in my school.
I especially sad when I see person who eat too much in daily like some Americans do.
Leftover food and overeating are equally serious problem for global environment.
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Hi, Ms. [이름]!
We have the same thoughts! I am very particular when it comes to food because I know that there are a lot of people who do not have proper meals in a day. Thank you for this and I am hoping that all people will be responsible for getting or taking what they can when they are eating.
Aki~
I am very sad alot of leftover food at lunch time in my school.
>>> I am very sad that there is a lot of leftover food in my school.
I especially sad when I see person who eat too much in daily like some Americans do.
>>> Especially when I see a person who eats too much the way some Americans do.
Leftover food and overeating are equally serious problem for global environment.
>>> Leftover food and overeating are an equally serious problem for the global environment.
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