Food
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I don\'t know exactly how certain food affects people or their health. Most people might not feel and mind it. However, those who are sensitive to the reaction of their bodies can sense the effect of certain food on their bodies. As for me, if I have cold food or drinks often, I am likely to suffer from digestive problems or diarrhea. Some people are allergic to certain food or drinks. And some people can\'t eat some food or plants such as cucumbers because of their DNA.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job answering the question. Just take note that when we are referring to different types, kinds, or varieties of food, we usually use ‘foods’ as the plural form.
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I don\'t know exactly how certain food affects people or their health.
>> I don’t know exactly how certain foods affect people or their health.
Most people might not feel and mind it.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Most people might not notice it or care about it.
However, those who are sensitive to the reaction of their bodies can sense the effect of certain food on their bodies.
>> However, those who are sensitive to their bodies’ reactions can sense the effects of certain foods on them.
As for me, if I have cold food or drinks often, I am likely to suffer from digestive problems or diarrhea.
>> CORRECT
Some people are allergic to certain food or drinks.
>> Some people are allergic to certain foods or drinks.
And some people can\'t eat some food or plants such as cucumbers because of their DNA.
>> Some people can’t eat certain foods or plants, such as cucumbers, because of their DNA.
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