Food and drinks for guests
학생이 쓴 원문
When inviting someone to my second house, I usually prepare meals for him or her. With some ingredients that my husband and I grow, I cook herbs bibimbab or barbecued meats. But when inviting someone to my house , I just prepare some fruit, snacks,and tea. I don\'t want my guests and my dog to feel stressed while having meals. That\'s why I suggest eating out. I also I want to give a nice experience of special food to my guests in my neighborhood.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
It’s really nice how considerate you are of your guests. I agree that it’s thoughtful to prepare food for them, but they should also feel comfortable while eating. Luckily, your new house is in a neighborhood with many delicious restaurants, so it’s a great idea to have the housewarming party by eating out first and then having dessert at your house later.
- T. Caitlyn
When inviting someone to my second house, I usually prepare meals for him or her.
>> CORRECT
With some ingredients that my husband and I grow, I cook herbs bibimbab or barbecued meats.
>> Using ingredients that my husband and I grow, I cook herb bibimbap or barbecued meats.
But when inviting someone to my house , I just prepare some fruit, snacks,and tea.
>> But when I invite someone to my house, I just prepare some fruit, snacks, and tea.
I don\'t want my guests and my dog to feel stressed while having meals.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why I suggest eating out.
>> CORRECT
I also I want to give a nice experience of special food to my guests in my neighborhood.
>> I also want to give my guests a nice experience with special food in my neighborhood.
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