food-and-mouth disease

Our country has a problem about food-and-mouth disease. So the price of pigs increased and lots of pigs have baried . People who raise domestic animals blamed it's goverment's fault.Time went by, pigs which already have baried have lots of problems. and public criticize that the goverment' action. it means they didn't make any preparations after baried. the problem is appeared some region. Water poolution is really serious so they didn't drink. Nowadays the weather is going to warm. Those are going to go bad. Some people insist why don't we follow other countries' method. We should have burned those animals. I agree with that. but the event already happened. I think it's better find some methods that how to reduce or remove that situation than criticize.

[이름], thank you for passing this composition. Please check on the corrections. Have a great weekend. Lei J   Our country had a problem with food-and-mouth disease. >>correct So the price of pigs increased and lots of pigs have baried . >>So pig meat became expensive and lots of pigs were burried. People who raise domestic animals blamed it's goverment's fault. >>People who were raising animals blamed the government. Time went by, pigs which already have baried have lots of problems. >>Time already passed and that pig burial caused lots of problems. and public criticize that the goverment' action. >>And the public criticized that action from the government. it means they didn't make any preparations after baried. >>It meant that they didn't make any preparations after the burial. the problem is appeared some region. >>The problem spread to other regions. Water poolution is really serious so they didn't drink. >>Water pollution became a really serious problem so they didn't have water to drink. Nowadays the weather is going to warm. >>Nowadays, the weather is getting warmer. Those are going to go bad. >>The situation is getting worse. Some people insist why don't we follow other countries' method. >>Some people insisted to follow other countries method. We should have burned those animals. >>correct I agree with that. but the event already happened. >>correct I think it's better find some methods that how to reduce or remove that situation than criticize. >>I think it is better to find some methods on how to solve a certain situation and not to be criticized.