Food delivery
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I think food delivery in Korea is separated when using delivery APP or not. When I was young, eating out was very rare and even I couldn\'t imagine food delivery. Just some Chinese restaurant delivered their food without delivery fee. But as many kind of food what can pack and deliver like fried chicken, pizza were popular,food delivery was more common,still no delivery fee. But the smart phone was spread out all around our society and delivery APP appeared, plus we went through Pandemic,the delivery industry was bigger than before. They charged money for using their APP but it was high rate. This issue isn\'t still solved, but people are using the APP for the delivery food.Many restaurant owners are managing to run their business, high rate fee is one of the reason to suffer them. even they say \"After I pay for the fee, I can\'t get profit\" I think it\'s not fair. So I try not to use the delivery APP. When I order some food I just call the restaurant so they don\'t need to spend extra.
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Hi!
Thank you for answering and expressing your thoughts about the question I sent. I have also made corrections on some sentences.
I appreciate the answer you had provided, as it also showed the insight for business owners who use the apps for their business.
Using delivery apps these days can be considered convenient, especially for customers, but the fees charged behind it are just a letdown, especially for struggling businesses.
~ Teacher Gina
~ Teacher Gina
I think food delivery in Korea is separated when using delivery APP or not.
>> I think food delivery in Korea differs depending on whether you use a delivery app or not.
>> Or: In Korea, food delivery is different when using an app versus not.
When I was young, eating out was very rare and even I couldn\'t imagine food delivery.
>> CORRECT.
Just some Chinese restaurant delivered their food without delivery fee.
>> Only some Chinese restaurants delivered food without a delivery fee.
But as many kind of food what can pack and deliver like fried chicken, pizza were popular,food delivery was more common,still no delivery fee.
>> As more types of popular food, such as fried chicken and pizza, became available for delivery, food delivery became more common, and there was still no delivery fee.
But the smart phone was spread out all around our society and delivery APP appeared, plus we went through Pandemic,the delivery industry was bigger than before.
>> As smartphones became widespread in our society, and delivery apps appeared, especially during the pandemic, the delivery industry grew much larger than before.
They charged money for using their APP but it was high rate.
>> They charged fees for using their apps, and the rates were high.
>> Or: They charged high fees in using the apps.
This issue isn\'t still solved, but people are using the APP for the delivery food.
>> This issue still hasn’t been solved, but people continue to use delivery apps for food.
Many restaurant owners are managing to run their business, high rate fee is one of the reason to suffer them.
>> Many restaurant owners are struggling to run their businesses, and high fees are one of the reasons.
even they say \"After I pay for the fee, I can\'t get profit\" I think it\'s not fair.
>> They even say, “After paying the fees, I can’t make a profit.” I think this is not fair.
So I try not to use the delivery APP.
>> CORRECT.
When I order some food I just call the restaurant so they don\'t need to spend extra.
>> CORRECT.
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