Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be bett
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With regard to the food, I believe that local food is much better than the imported one. We know that fresh food is usually produced from the local farm. So, these are more expensive than the other ones. When we import the food from another countries, the most important factor is how fresh the food is. Especially, meats are transported in frozen and then those deliver to the markets around our nation. Each store handles the food with their ways, some sell it frozen, the others sell it after defrosting. We can\\\'t say that frozen food and defrosted food are fresh. That\\\'s why imported food are usually cheeper than local food. If nobody has financial problem, they would eat local food. However, we can select food according to the rate between price and quality. Some people would buy imported food and then use the rest of money to purchase other stuffs. I have learned that the trade between the countries are beneficial because each country has their specific resources and skills.
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Good morning Mr. [이름]~! ^^ Thanks for your opinions and ideas when doing your homework. Keep it up~! ^^ Have a lovely week!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
With regard to the food, I believe that local food is much better than the imported ones.
>>> CORRECT
We know that fresh food is usually produced from the local farm.
>>> CORRECT
So, these are more expensive than the other ones.
>>> CORRECT
When we import the food from another countries, the most important factor is how fresh the food is.
>>> CORRECT
Especially, meat are transported in frozen and then those deliver to the markets around our nation.
>>> CORRECT
Each store handles the food with their ways, some sell it frozen, the others sell it after defrosting.
>>> CORRECT
We can\\\'t say that frozen food and defrosted food are fresh.
>>> CORRECT
That\'s why imported food are usually cheaper than local food.
>>> CORRECT
If nobody has financial problems, they would eat local food.
>>> CORRECT
However, we can select food according to the rate between the price and quality.
>>> CORRECT
Some people would buy imported food and then use the rest of money to purchase other stuffs.
>>> CORRECT
I have learned that the trade among countries are beneficial because each country has its specific resources and skills.
>>> CORRECT
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