Food which I avoid to eat
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I try to eat low carbohydrate, high fat and protein food. So I avoid to eat soda, high carbohydrate such as rice, noodles and sugar.
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Hi, Sir Thomas!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I try to eat low carbohydrate, high fat and protein food.
>> I try to eat food with low carbohydrates, high fat, and protein.
So I avoid to eat soda, high carbohydrate such as rice, noodles and sugar.
>> So I avoid drinking soda, eating food with high carbohydrates such as rice, noodles, and sugar.
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