Foods.
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Hi Gabby.
Today is Saturday. Have you been doing okay today?
Today is cool a lot. How\'s weather there?
I stayed whole day today. The weather was good but I just wanted to relax at home.
The most recent, I often went to a restaurant called NaeDuRak specialty Korean food.
I like that. That is clean, delicious and get kind manager too.
I often went it but can\'t went now. You know the reason. Don\'t you?
Usually many people like foods that ate at childhood. When my childhood had net various foods.
I grew up eating vegetables, water parsley, chives, bean sprouts etc.
Also we grew bean sprouts in the room but now buy its.
Grains caught short of rice and instead of rice ate barley rice.
I lived in a mountain district to elementary school times and moved to a city.
My favorite foods are that. I like all foods maked of another person.
Good night Gabby.
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Hi Suzan. Awesome work. Keep improving every day!
- T. Gabby :)
Hi Gabby.
>> Correct.
Today is Saturday. Have you been doing okay today?
Today is Saturday. Have you been doing okay today?
>> Today is a Saturday. How are you doing?
Today is cool a lot.
Today is cool a lot.
>> Today is a lot cooler.
How\'s weather there?
>> How\'s the weather there?
I stayed whole day today.
I stayed whole day today.
>> I stayed home the whole day.
The weather was good but I just wanted to relax at home.
>> Correct.
The most recent, I often went to a restaurant called NaeDuRak specialty Korean food.
The most recent, I often went to a restaurant called NaeDuRak specialty Korean food.
>> Recently, I went to a restaurant called NaeDuRak, it\'s a Korean specialty.
I like that. That is clean, delicious and get kind manager too.
I like that. That is clean, delicious and get kind manager too.
>> I like that place! It\'s clean, the food is delicious and the manager is kind.
I often went it but can\'t went now.
I often went it but can\'t went now.
>> I often go to that restaurant.
You know the reason. Don\'t you?
>> Do you know the reason?
Usually many people like foods that ate at childhood.
Usually many people like foods that ate at childhood.
>> Children usually love to eat a lot of foods.
When my childhood had net various foods.
>> During my childhood, we ate various foods.
I grew up eating vegetables, water parsley, chives, bean sprouts etc.
I grew up eating vegetables, water parsley, chives, bean sprouts etc.
>> Correct.
Also we grew bean sprouts in the room but now buy its.
Also we grew bean sprouts in the room but now buy its.
>> We also grew up having bean sprouts in the room, but now, we buy it.
Grains caught short of rice and instead of rice ate barley rice.
Grains caught short of rice and instead of rice ate barley rice.
>> We eat barley rice instead of grains.
I lived in a mountain district to elementary school times and moved to a city.
I lived in a mountain district to elementary school times and moved to a city.
>> I lived in a mountain and I moved to the city.
My favorite foods are that. I like all foods maked of another person.
My favorite foods are that. I like all foods maked of another person.
>> Those are my favorite foods. I like all foods prepared by other people.
Good night Gabby.
Good night Gabby.
>> Correct.
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