Foods

2010-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

Some people say "I live to eat, and eat to live." Also according to a korean archaic word, health of teeth is one of the Five Blessings. This shows us that gourmandism is one of the most important things for our living. To resume our story, my favorite food is my mother made food, and the best of these foods is a korean traditional flat cake. She is handy in the kitchen so I like everything. Because she is a little bit idel, she usually doesn't make cake. (The cake is very complicated to make.) So I'm merely put to feel inconvenienced. Suddenly I'm very hungry now.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!...Its good to know that you’re mother knows how to bake because my mother knows too. She is as good as your mom. I also like her made cakes. Well, tell your mom to teach you how to bake so you can bake for your girlfriend.hahaha!She would love that, I'm sure. See you.   Some people say "I live to eat, and eat to live." >>>correct Also according to a korean archaic word, health of teeth is one of the Five Blessings. >>>correct This shows us that gourmandism is one of the most important things for our living. >>>correct To resume our story, my favorite food is my mother made food, and the best of these foods is a korean traditional flat cake. >>>To resume with our story, my favorite food is my mother’s made food, and the best of these foods is a Korean traditional flat cake. She is handy in the kitchen so I like everything. >>>correct Because she is a little bit idel, she usually doesn't make cake. >>>Because she is a little bit idle, she usually doesn’t make a cake. (The cake is very complicated to make.) >>>Cakes are very complicated to bake. So I'm merely put to feel inconvenienced. >>>So I merely feel inconvenient. Suddenly I'm very hungry now. >>>correct    

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·