Foods in Macao
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Over the centuries, Macao developed an unique cuisine with Portuguese ,Chinese and Indian cooking
You can see good Portuguese restaurants there.
Among them, I strongly recommend you “Alocha”restaurant
This food is called “African Chicken”
It has the name because people sweat heavilly
When they eat it as if they were in Africa due to the chilly tastes.
But to korean, It is not a big deal.
There’s one you have to eat in Macao.
It’s an eggtart, very Soft and delicious.
The fastfood chain KFC has been selling it since last year.
Why don’y you try it?
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Over the centuries, Macao developed an unique cuisine with Portuguese ,Chinese and Indian cooking
>>>Over the centuries, Macao developed a unique cuisine of Portuguese, Chinese and Indian cooking.You can see good Portuguese restaurants there.
>>>Correct!!Among them, I strongly recommend you “Alocha”restaurant>>>Among those, I strongly recommend you “Alocha”restaurant.This food is called “African Chicken”
>>>This specialty food there is called “African Chicken”.It has the name because people sweat heavilly
>>>It has that name because people sweat heavily.
When they eat it as if they were in Africa due to the chilly tastes.
>>>..whenever they eat it. due to the chilly taste, its is as if they were in Africa. But to korean, It is not a big deal.>>>But for koreans, the spiciness is not a big deal.There’s one you have to eat in Macao.
>>>There's one food you have to try in Macao.Its an eggtart, very Soft and delicious.
>>>Its an eggtart. It's very Soft and delicious.The fastfood chain KFC has been selling it since last year.
>>>The fastfood chain KFC has been selling it since last year.Why don’y you try it?
>>>correct!!
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