foot and mouth disease

2011-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Thesedays, many cows and pigs are dying because of foot and mouth disease. It is harmless to people because this is a disease appears to animals which have 2 heels. Also, it is okay to eat animals which have foot and mouth disease because it appears to animals which have 2heels and foot and month disease's virus is very weak to heat so I heard it doesn't matter.About 1.4 million pigs, cows, goats and deer had died. What a sad news. There are also many farmers who died because the animals that they considered as money had almost died and also, some soldiers had died in the process of preventing foot and mouth disease. I hope this problem will be solved in a short time.

강사 첨삭

Hello Joey, I'm sorry to hear about that. It's sad to think about all the farmers who are losing money over this. Talk to you again tomorrow. -RJ-  Thesedays, many cows and pigs are dying because of foot and mouth disease.  >> These days, many cows and pigs are dying because of the foot and mouth disease. It is harmless to people because this is a disease appears to animals which have 2 heels.  >>It is harmless to people because this is a disease appears in animals that have 2 heels.  Also, it is okay to eat animals which have foot and mouth disease because it appears to animals which have 2heels and foot and month disease's virus is very weak to heat so I heard it doesn't matter. >>Also, it is okay to eat animals which have foot and mouth disease because it appears in animals that have 2 heels, and foot and month disease's virus is very weak against heat so I heard it doesn't matter. About 1.4 million pigs, cows, goats and deer had died.  >>correct What a sad news.  >>correct There are also many farmers who died because the animals that they considered as money had almost died and also, some soldiers had died in the process of preventing foot and mouth disease.  >>There are also many farmers who died because their livestock died. Also, some soldiers had died in the process of preventing foot and mouth disease.  I hope this problem will be solved in a short time. >>I hope this problem will be solved soon.

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