'For every minute you are angry, you lose sixty seconds of happiness.' Do you agree?

2016-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I cannot agree more with the saying “for every minute you are angry, you lose sixty seconds of happiness.”I often get angry. I well understand how bad it is to get angry, however, it is not easy to control the anger. It is a poison which will purge into our mind and destroy our good nature. Today, the society we are living in is very complex and highly competitive, so that it is stressful. We might look at anger as an absolutely normal reaction. Despite being aware of the fact that anger is an extremely dangerous emotion to express, we sometime cannot help getting angry. As a matter of fact, it can harm us more than our opponent. Healthy relationships can split wide open in a fraction of few angry moments. We can land into even bigger trouble, if we fall slave to anger. We have to remember the famous quote “a fool gives full vent to his anger, but a wise man keeps himself under control.” When we are to explore, count numbers and slowly blows away the anger that presents within us

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Good evening, Sir [이름]! Happy Friday! I totally agree with your ideas. We should really control our anger. There are also instances wherein we say the things we don\'t want to because we are mad. I will keep in mind the quote that you shared. Thanks for a wonderful week again. Have a great night adn weekend ahead of you. Teavher Nina   I cannot agree more with the saying “for every minute you are angry, you lose sixty seconds of happiness.” >> correct I often get angry. >> correct I well understand how bad it is to get angry, however, it is not easy to control the anger. >> correct It is a poison which will purge into our mind and destroy our good nature. >> correct Today, the society we are living in is very complex and highly competitive, so that it is stressful. >> correct We might look at anger as an absolutely normal reaction. >> correct Despite being aware of the fact that anger is an extremely dangerous emotion to express, we sometime cannot help getting angry. >> correct As a matter of fact, it can harm us more than our opponent. >> correct Healthy relationships can split wide open in a fraction of few angry moments. >> correct We can land into even bigger trouble, if we fall slave to anger. >> correct We have to remember the famous quote “a fool gives full vent to his anger, but a wise man keeps himself under control.” >> correct When we are to explore, count numbers and slowly blows away the anger that presents within us >> correct

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