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Dear [Name]. [Name] good evening I have some question about below exaple Dear [Name]. [Name] Morning Mr. [Name] I know that you are so busy But I want recieve emplyee expense voucher. We have to recieve Mr. [Name] sign too . and We have to send to Nam[이름]. And We have to recieve emplyee expense voucher from Nam[이름] until tomorrow. So We don't have enough time. Can you help me? I looking forward to receive your approval as soon as possible. If you have question please let me know.

Hello there my dear Bella, it was so nice reading your composition again..;) Like I told you before, writing an email is the same as writing a formal letter. You should start your letter with a simlpe greeting then proceed with the topic you wanna tell them.. And what you did was right!That was a job well done! Just a few tips; you can just start the greeting with a simple one like, Good Day! These are just some of the corrections noted: Talk to you again my dear.. T.Cam Dear [Name]. [Name]>>correct!good evening >>correct!I have some question about below exaple>>I have some questions about an example belowDear Mr. [Name] >>correct!Good Morning Mr. [Name] >>correct! >>Good Day!- better (the simpler the better)I know that you are so busy>>correct!But I want recieve emplyee expense voucher.>>But I want to receive the expense voucher from the employeeWe have to recieve Mr. [Name] sign too . and We have to send to Nam[이름]. >>We have to receive Mr. [Name]'s signature and like wise send it to Nam[이름]And We have to recieve emplyee expense voucher from Nam[이름] until tomorrow.>>And we also have to receive the employee's voucher from Nam[이름] until tomorrowSo We don't have enough time.>>But we dont have enough timeCan you help me?>>correct! >>Can you help me with this problem- betterI looking forward to receive your approval as soon as possible.>>Im looking forward to receiving your approval as soon as possibleIf you have question please let me know. >>If you still have some questions please let us know.