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Why did you apply to our company?
I really like to speak english.
I used to live in the Philippines an Australiafor 3 years.
I have experianced working in a hospital as a nurse more than 7 years.
I think I can combine two of these very well.
so, i can work very well, for this international medical center.
What is your strength?
I have warm heart.
I really get along wth people.
what is your weakness?
I really count on time too tight.
sometimes, It makes me stress , so i need take a deepbreath.
what is your goal?
I want to be a leader of nursing department.
so, I can take all these field.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julie!
Good Evening**,
How are you doing?
Please check all of the corrections that I\'ve made.
I do hope that these things will help.
If you have any questions, just let me know.
T. Barbara**,
Why did you apply to our company?>> Correct!
OR:>> Why do you want to work in our company?I really like to speak english.
>> I really like to speak in English.I used to live in the Philippines an Australiafor 3 years.>> I used to live in the Philippines and Australia for 3 years.
I have experianced working in a hospital as a nurse more than 7 years.
>> I have been working in a hospital as a nurse more than 7 years.
I think I can combine two of these very well.
>> I think I can combine these two very well.so, i can work very well, for this international medical center.>> So, I can work very well for this international medical center.What is your strength?
>> Correct!
I have warm heart.
>> I am kind.I really get along wth people.>> I really get along with people.what is your weakness?>> What is your weakness?I really count on time too tight.
>> Correct!
OR:>> I value time too much.sometimes, It makes me stress , so i need take a deepbreath.>> Sometimes, it makes me stress so I need to take a deep breath.what is your goal?
>> What is your goal?I want to be a leader of nursing department.
>> I want to be a leader of a nursing department.so, I can take all these field.
>> So, I can take all these fields.
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