For Jisun Oral Test 1
학생이 쓴 원문
Asperger\'s syndrome is one of several clinical features of autism spectrum disorder. Like children on the autism spectrum, they have incrementally abnormal social interactions and repetitive behavioral problems. Their behaviors, interests, and activities are more limited than those of ordinary children. They also struggle with interpersonal relationships. However, it is often detected late relatively with a delay of cognitive and language development and competency. They prefer hanging out with adults or being alone rather than playing with their peers. Their inability to understand other people\'s minds often leads to misunderstandings, which often leads to suffering that they must have gone through.
The cause of Asperger\'s syndrome has not been clearly authenticated and identified. But now it’s widely known that if someone in your family has Asperger\'s syndrome, members of that family are more affected and more likely to develop it because of a genetic influence.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane! This topic sounds so interesting! Don\'t worry, I will send your oral test part 2 as soon as possible. -Faith-
Asperger\'s syndrome is one of several clinical features of autism spectrum disorder. >> Asperger\'s syndrome is one of the several forms of autism spectrum disorder.
Like children on the autism spectrum, they have incrementally abnormal social interactions and repetitive behavioral problems.
>> Children with autism spectrum have incrementally abnormal social interactions and repetitive behavioral problems.
Their behaviors, interests, and activities are more limited than those of ordinary children.
>> CORRECT
They also struggle with interpersonal relationships.
>> CORRECT
OR They have unusual social skills.
However, it is often detected late relatively with a delay of cognitive and language development and competency.
>> CORRECT
They prefer hanging out with adults or being alone rather than playing with their peers.
>> CORRECT
Their inability to understand other people\'s minds often leads to misunderstandings, which often leads to suffering that they must have gone through.
>> Their inability to understand other people\'s minds often leads to misunderstandings and sufferings that they have to go through.
The cause of Asperger\'s syndrome has not been clearly authenticated and identified.
>> CORRECT
OR The cause of Asperger\'s syndrome has not been determined conclusively.
But now it’s widely known that if someone in your family has Asperger\'s syndrome, members of that family are more affected and more likely to develop it because of a genetic influence.
>> CORRECT
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