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2012-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Tell what you learned from a recent book Do you have a balanced lifestyle? What computer systems and software do you know? Describe how a sport or hobby has taught you a lesson in teamwork Tell me about a situation in which it was difficult for you to remain objective. Describe a time when you had to assist a co-worker Describe a time when you tackled a tough or unpopular assignment

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Hello there! It\'s nice to see that despite of your busy schedule, you still find time to accomplish your homework. It shows that your interest in empowering your English is at peak. Great Job! T. Kelly^^ Here are my corrections for you: Tell what you learned from a recent book >> Tell me something about what you\'ve learned from a recent book? (Don\'t forget the punctuation mark)Do you have a balanced lifestyle?>> Correct or >> Do you have a balance lifestyle?What computer systems and software do you know?>> CorrectDescribe how a sport or hobby has taught you a lesson in teamwork>> Correct or >> Describe how a sport or hobby has taught you a lesson about teamwork? (Don\'t forget the punctuation mark)Tell me about a situation in which it was difficult for you to remain objective>> Correct or >> Tell me about a situation in which it was difficult for you to remain objective? (Don\'t forget the punctuation mark)Describe a time when you had to assist a co-worker>> Correct or >> Describe a time when you had to assist a co-worker? (Don\'t forget the punctuation mark)Describe a time when you tackled a tough or unpopular assignment >> Correct or >> Describe a time when you tackled a tough or an unpopular assignment? (Don\'t forget the punctuation mark)

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