For my children.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [Name]. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on this. I totally agree with you! I am always thankful to my mom for being patient with us, too. I am sure your children are happy and proud to have you as their mom!
~ Teacher Marie
I was possible to control when my children were very young.
>> I was able to control my children when they were still very young.
However, I didn\'t take long time to realize that, I couldn\'t control them.
>> However, it didn\'t take a long time for me to realize that I couldn\'t control them anymore.
Elders said, \"We don\'t try to beat children and have to wait for them.\"
>> Elders say, \"We don\'t have to beat children; we just have to wait for them.\"
It was not easy, but I made effort, and I could have comfortable myself.
>> It was not easy, but I made the effort so I could be more comfortable with myself.
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