For my health.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Gabby!
I envy you because you are young, pretty and have a cute kid. I have been days young too.
But I am aged now.
Mybody isn\'t easy recovery did after hard works.
It,s sunny today. I try to walk over 10,000 steps a day.
Also I go to the mountain once a week.
I drink vita[이름] every day. It\'s vita[이름] fruits not medicine. And I try to enjoy my life.
I try to laugh a lot and eat healthy food.
I think the best thing having affirmative [이름]d.
Good bye Gabby.
From Susan.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Good morning. Stay healthy!
-T. Gabby :)
Hi Gabby!I envy you because you are young, pretty and have a cute kid.
>> I envy you because you are still young, pretty and you have a cute kid.
I have been days young too.
>> I was young too.
But I am aged now.
But I am aged now.
>> But now I aged.
Mybody isn\'t easy recovery did after hard works.
Mybody isn\'t easy recovery did after hard works.
>> My body can\'t recover easily after working hard.
It,s sunny today. I try to walk over 10,000 steps a day.
It,s sunny today. I try to walk over 10,000 steps a day.
>> It\'s a sunny today. I always try to walk over 10,000 steps everyday.
Also I go to the mountain once a week.
Also I go to the mountain once a week.
>> Also, I go to the mountain once a week.
I drink vita[이름] every day. It\'s vita[이름] fruits not medicine.
I drink vita[이름] every day. It\'s vita[이름] fruits not medicine.
>> I drink fruits vita[이름]s everyday.
And I try to enjoy my life.
>> And I try to enjoy my life.
I try to laugh a lot and eat healthy food.
>> I also try to laugh a lot and eat healthy food.
I think the best thing having affirmative [이름]d.
I think the best thing having affirmative [이름]d.
>> I think it\'s the best to have a positive [이름]dset.
Good bye Gabby.
Good bye Gabby.
>> Correct.
From Susan.
From Susan.
>> Correct.
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