For my health
학생이 쓴 원문
I am trying to eat well and s[이름]p well for my health.
Therefore I have agood habit of eating less and several times, giong to bed early and waking up early.
In addion, I try to stay happy.
However my weakness for my health is not to work out enough.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Thank you for your consistent efforts.
Everything would be useful as we go on with the learning process.
I respect your diligence and willingness to improve yourself.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I am trying to eat well and s[이름]p well for my health.
>> Correct
Therefore I have agood habit of eating less and several times, giong to bed early and waking up early.
Therefore I have agood habit of eating less and several times, giong to bed early and waking up early.
>> Therefore I have a good habit of eating less and several times, going to bed early and waking up early.
In addion, I try to stay happy.
In addion, I try to stay happy.
>> In addition, I try to stay happy.
However my weakness for my health is not to work out enough.
However my weakness for my health is not to work out enough.
>> However my weakness regarding my health is the fact that I don\'t work out enough.
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