For the better life, I have to agree that my neighboring is good people.

2018-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

My company coworker and boss are good people I think. They treat me kindly. And back in my younger old times, I sometimes feel the circumstances are not good and dissatisfactions. But now is O.K. when a one grows there are much of twists and turning points. But I cannot overcome that, I have some aftertaste somehow. But you including my neighbors are treat me well. I always thankful and grateful with that. Thanks for reading.

강사 첨삭

Good day Mr. [이름], thanks for doing your homework.

See you later in class.

- Blair


My company coworker and boss are good people I think. They treat me kindly.
And back in my younger old times, I sometimes feel the circumstances are not good and dissatisfactions. But now is O.K.
when a one grows there are much of twists and turning points.
But I cannot overcome that, I have some aftertaste somehow.
But you including my neighbors are treat me well. I always thankful and grateful with that.
Thanks for reading.


My co workers, bosses, are good people I think, they treat me kindly. Back in my old times, I sometimes experienced circumstances wherein I felt dissatisfactions. As we grow old, there are many twists and turning points of our lives. But I cannot overcome fully. But you including my neighbors treat me well and I am always thankful and grateful for that. Thanks for reading.

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