For the first time.

2014-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi Jane~~ Today, We ate breakfast menu roasted fish , beef and organic vegetables dish. My hasband should eat more protein and less then fat. Nowadays, He takes working stress a lot. And for the first time, I went to exhibition interationalfood eat out frencharge in chang won city. There were many kind of things.

강사 첨삭


Hi^^

Thank you for your composition today! I hope you are enjoying this beautiful day! Take care and stay happy!

T. Jane ^^


Hi Jane~~

>> Hi Jane.
Today, We ate breakfast menu roasted fish , beef and organic vegetables dish.

>> We had roasted fish, beef and organic vegetable dishes for breakfast.

>>OR: Today, our menu for breakfast consists of roasted fish, beef and organic vegetables.
 My hasband should eat more protein and less then fat.

>>My husband should eat more foods that contain protein than fat.

>>OR: My husband should eat more foods that contain protein and eat less fatty foods.
 Nowadays, He takes working stress a lot.

>>Nowadays, there are a lot of stress in his work.

And for the first time, I went to exhibition interationalfood
eat out frencharge in chang won city.

>>DID YOU MEAN: And for the first time, I went to an international food exhibition and ate at frencharge in Chang Won City.
 There were many kind of things.

>>DID YOU MEAN: There were many kinds of foods there.


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