For the Homework& feedback

2018-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Elly. I rejected a feedback from today. I think this will be usefull to focus on class. Both are able to concentrate eachther. 😁 Thanks Elly. And.... Whenever i listen to my past class, i hope runaway to anywhere....😵 But i will meet good day.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you so much for today’s note.

I appreciate your consideration by informing me on the change!

Have a great day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

TOPIC: For the Homework& feedback.

Elly. I rejected a feedback from today.

>>Elly, I removed the feedback from today.

 I think this will be usefull to focus on class.

>> I think this will be useful in order to focus on the class.

Both are able to concentrate eachther.

>>So, both of us will be able to concentrate on each other.

Thanks Elly.

 And....

 Whenever i listen to my past class, i hope runaway to anywhere....;

>>And whenever I listen to my past classes, I hope not to runaway anywhere.

 But i will meet good day. 

>>But I will still have a good day. 

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