For the Homework& feedback
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you so much for today’s note.
I appreciate your consideration by informing me on the change!
Have a great day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
TOPIC: For the Homework& feedback.
Elly. I rejected a feedback from today.
>>Elly, I removed the feedback from today.
I think this will be usefull to focus on class.
>> I think this will be useful in order to focus on the class.
Both are able to concentrate eachther.
>>So, both of us will be able to concentrate on each other.
Thanks Elly.
And....
Whenever i listen to my past class, i hope runaway to anywhere....;
>>And whenever I listen to my past classes, I hope not to runaway anywhere.
But i will meet good day.
>>But I will still have a good day.
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