for today's lesson
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Lei
Thank you for teaching me today. Is 'Lei' your real native name? or english name? I'm just curious~~.
Uhm... I think that there was a misunderstaning.i want to make sure my opinion that i wanted to say during today's lesson. On question #1 "what do you think about reducing family time to make more money?", I'd like to say that we don't have to choose just one between making more money and having a family time. For example, even if we work very hard in company, we could try to have a family time in home. So i'm sorry that I didn't convey my thought successfully. I'll try to prepare more than to do today.^^ byebye~~~
강사 첨삭
Hi Dr. [Name]!
I mean Greg! Hehe...It’s always a pleasure talking to you. Lei is my real name. Lei Anne to be exact. By the way, you don’t have to say sorry if you were not able to deliver your thoughts properly. That is one area some of my students are having a hard time. Even if you know what to say, you will not be able to convey all of your thoughts properly because you need to say it using another language. Don’t worry about it. Just do your best next time okay. Cheer up!!! See You later!!
Lei J
Hello LeiThank you for teaching me today. Is 'Lei' your real native name? or (E)english name? I'm just curious~~.Uhm...
>>>Correct
I think that there was a misunderstaning.i want to make sure my opinion that i wanted to say during today's lesson.
>>> I think that there was a misunderstanding. I want to make sure about my opinion that/which I wanted to say during today's lesson.
In question #1 "what do you think about reducing family time to make more money?", I'd like to say that we don't have to choose just one between making more money and having a family time.
>>>Correct, you may remove the article a in family time
For example, even if we work very hard in company, we could try to have a family time in home.
>>> For example, even if we work very hard, we could try to have family time at home.
So i'm sorry that I didn't convey my thought successfully. I'll try to prepare more than to do today.^^
>>> I'll try to prepare more than I did today.^^
(B)byebye~~~
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