for women, Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t agree these women\'s requirements.
The election policies of president should not be targeted at specific group like women, old people, and men .
We need good policies for our better democratic society.
I hope nobody demand policies for only their group.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
On point, ma\'am! No one should take anyone a disdvantage because of gender. They have to see the capability of a person to serve others.
Aki~
I don\'t agree these women\'s requirements.
>>> I don\'t agree with these women\'s requirements.
The election policies of president should not be targeted at specific group like women, old people, and men .
>>> The election policies of the president should not be targeted at specific groups like women, old people, and men.
We need good policies for our better democratic society.
>>> We need good policies to make a better democratic society.
I hope nobody demand policies for only their group.
>>> I hope nobody demands policies for only their group.
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