For you, how would you define miracle in your own words? or What is a miracle for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Miracle happen suddenly in any situations.
and it is only applied to good case but bad case.
Miracle occurs in all area, time and age.
In my case, getting a job after school was my miracle, compare to my ability in school days.
And getting and living with my wife who is beautiful was my second miracle.
Miss. [Name]
I am sorry that sentence is too short and simple because of my limited ability.
I am sure that It will be better day by day.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jack!
I appreciate you for submitting your homework. ^^
Don\'t be sorry about your sentences being short and simple.
This is actually a great start for making longer sentences.
You can do it!
Practicing everyday helps and definitely, you\'ll get better day by day. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Miracle suddenly happens in any situations.
>> Or: Miracles suddenly happen in any situations.
and it is only applied to good case but bad case.
and it is only applied to good case but bad case.
>> And it is only applied to a good case, not a bad case.
Miracle occurs in all area, time and age.
Miracle occurs in all area, time and age.
>> CORRECT.
In my case, getting a job after school was my miracle, compare to my ability in school days.
In my case, getting a job after school was my miracle, compare to my ability in school days.
>> In my case, getting a job after school was my miracle, compared to my ability in school days.
And getting and living with my wife who is beautiful was my second miracle.
And getting and living with my wife who is beautiful was my second miracle.
>> CORRECT.
Miss. [Name]
I am sorry that sentence is too short and simple because of my limited ability.
Miss. [Name]
I am sorry that sentence is too short and simple because of my limited ability.
>> I am sorry that the sentence is too short and simple because of my limited ability.
I am sure that It will be better day by day.
I am sure that It will be better day by day.
>> CORRECT.
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