For you, what is the most dangerous sport?
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I am not good at playing sports with a ball because I hurt my ankle 20 years ago while I was riding a snowboard. It was first time for me to ride a snowboard and didn\'t know how to stand up if I fell down. I tried to twist a snowboard but it was not right way to stand. I still have pain on my ankle if I do exercise hardly. I have a fear of skiing, riding snowboard on the snow due to my experience before. It was Beiging winter olympic few weeks ago, we can see a lot of sport games which look dangerous such as sled, ski jump and so on. I believe that winter sports are much more dangerous than summer sports.
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~ T. CamilleI am not good at playing sports with a ball because I hurt my ankle 20 years ago while I was riding a snowboard.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am bad at playing sports with a ball because I hurt my ankle 20 years ago while I was riding a snowboard.
It was first time for me to ride a snowboard and didn\'t know how to stand up if I fell down.
>> It was my first time to ride a snowboard and didn\'t know how to stand up if I fall down.
I tried to twist a snowboard but it was not right way to stand.
>> I tried to twist a snowboard but it was not the right way to stand.
I still have pain on my ankle if I do exercise hardly.
>> CORRECT!
I have a fear of skiing, riding snowboard on the snow due to my experience before.
>> I have a fear of skiing and riding a snowboard due to my experience before.
OR >> >> I am afraid of skiing and riding a snowboard due to my experience before.
It was Beiging winter olympic few weeks ago, we can see a lot of sport games which look dangerous such as sled, ski jump and so on.
>> It was Beijing Winter Olympics a few weeks ago, we can see a lot of sport games which look dangerous such as sled, ski jump and so on.
I believe that winter sports are much more dangerous than summer sports.
>> CORRECT!
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