For you, what makes a man? a woman?

2014-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Naomi

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Good morning, my teacher Naomi And i'm bruse, not Andrew...(yesterday in homework your reply, you said me as Andrew) and in today's correction, I think your comment is different from our studying. It seems that you were confused with other studying. We studied first page in our textbook. Homework title : For you, what makes a man? a woman? i'll regard a man or a woman as human The human is diffrent from nonhuman animal in some reason. - The human has religion - The human can expess many feelings as like happiness, sadness, angriness. - The human can make high level of sociality. - The human can use many tools in many ways with high intelligence. - The human can anticipate what is to come and can prepare the coming problem. Thanks.

강사 첨삭

Hi Bruse! Hope you had a really wonderful weekend!

 

I am so sorry I called you with different name..kkkk and thank you for understanding.^^

About the correction, at the last part that is not you.Those are the common mistake that students usually commit.

Try to learn from it.

 

See you later. Thank you.

 

-T.Naomi^^

 

Good morning, my teacher Naomi

>>Good Morning, my teacher Naomi,
And i\'m bruse, not Andrew...(yesterday in homework your reply, you said me as Andrew)
>>And I\'m Bruse, not Andrew. (yesterday in our homework you called me Andrew)
and in today\'s correction, I think your comment is different from our studying.
>>And in today\'s correction, I think your comment is different from what we studied.
It seems that you were confused with other studying.
>>It seems that you were confused with another class.
We studied first page in our textbook.
>>We studied the first page in our textbook.
Homework title : For you, what makes a man? a woman?
>>correct
i\'ll regard a man or a woman as human
>>I\'ll regard a man or a woman as human
The human is diffrent from nonhuman animal in some reason.
>>The human is different from animal in some reasons.
- The human has religion

>>Human has religion.
- The human can expess many feelings as like happiness, sadness, angriness.

>>Human can express many feelings like happiness, sadness, anger, etc.
- The human can make high level of sociality.

>>Human can has high level of sociability.
- The human can use many tools in many ways with high intelligence.

>>Human can use many tools in many ways with high intelligence.
- The human can anticipate what is to come and can prepare the coming problem.

>>Human can anticipate what is to come and can prepare for the coming problem.
Thanks.

>>correct

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