For you, what makes a woman a man?

2014-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Naomi

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may be all people thinking different about what makes a woman, a man. because people standard of this topic is changeing as generation, [이름] ground, sence. In my case, a woman has to have consideration and a good hart. To do put on an innocent air and smile on face in front a man or first meet someone. Always care self-appearance or clothes for image. A man has to powerful muscle and physical appearance. Man has to keep faith and love only one girl at same time.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday [이름]!

Hope you had a great weekend!^^

Hey, watch out for your capitalization.

kkk..It is your standard for man..^^

nice..

See you.

-T.Naomi^^

may be all people thinking different about what makes a woman, a man.

>>Maybe all people\'s thinking are different about what makes a woman, a man.
because people standard of this topic is changeing as generation, [이름] ground, sence.

>>Because everyone\'s standard of this topic is changing as with generation, [이름] ground, etc.
In my case, a woman has to have consideration and a good hart.

>>In my case, a woman has to have consideration and a good heart.
To do put on an innocent air and smile on face in front a man or first meet someone.

>>To put on an innocent smile on the face in front a man or during your first meeting.
Always care self-appearance or clothes for image.

>>Always care about your self-appearance or clothes for your image.
A man has to powerful muscle and physical appearance.

>>A man has to have powerful muscle and physical appearance.
Man has to keep faith and love only one girl at same time.

>>Man has to keep faith and love only for one girl at same time.

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