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2025-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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I really appreciate your concerns of my busy schedule. ^^ I also hope I will go back to the usual routine. Every time I have your class on the phone, I feel so refreshed and confident. Thaks again. I think many successful people blend them—like a student who studies engineering but interns at a startup, or someone who majors in literature while freelancing in media. They graduate with both the theory and the survival skills. I can see there is always pros and cons in all the things.

강사 첨삭

I really appreciate your concerns of my busy schedule. ^^ I also hope I will go back to the usual routine. Every time I have your class on the phone, I feel so refreshed and confident.
Thanks again.
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Hi, Charlie^^
Thank you for sharing.
I\'m glad to hear that. 
I also enjoy the classes with you.
_T. SHAY^^
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I think many successful people blend them-like a student who studies engineering but interns at a startup, or someone who majors in literature while freelancing in media. 
>>Correct
OR: I think many successful people balance both-for instance, an engineering student who interns at a startup, or a literature major who freelances in media.
They graduate with both the theory and the survival skills. 
>>They graduate with both theoretical knowledge and survival skills.
I can see there is always pros and cons in all the things.
>>I can see there are always pros and cons in everything.

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