Foregin workers
학생이 쓴 원문
We have to be fair to foregin workers in Korea.
It seems that oriental people have ironical perceptions .
We tend to consider that white people are advanced countries and they are superior to us.
Relatively we don\'t think so about Asians and Blacks.
When I read newspaper and news about discrimination against foregin workers and their poor living surroundings, I am veru upset.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
I love what you have written. I would agree with you, most Asians feel inferior to white ( Americans and Europeans), so even our own country discriminate us.
Have a great day. I\'ll talk with you later,
Aki~
We have to be fair to foreign workers in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
It seems that oriental people have ironic perceptions.
>>> CORRECT!!
We tend to consider that white people are advanced countries and they are superior to us.
>>> CORRECT!
Relatively we don\'t think so about Asians and Blacks.
>>> Relatively we don\'t think about Asians and Blacks.
When I read newspapers and news about discrimination against foreign workers and their poor living surroundings, I am very upset.
>>> CORRECT!
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