Foreign country, Neighbors
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Living in the present is much more challenging because these days to find jobs is harder than the past. So most people try to everything harder. Also, on my experiences, although whenever I have exam I did my best, results were not satisfied.
6. Tourism has changed over the decades. It\'s because nowadays, technology is developed and there are many new places, so tourist attraction increased. Also, thanks to development of technology, transportation like trains or planes was also developed.
1. While I was close with my neighbors when I was young, now each have lots of things to do. So my neighbors and I gradually apart. However, there are school friends in my neighborhood, keeping our relationship.
2. I came this neighborhood when I was 9. It is very long time, but little awkward each other. Next door neighbors are still close with me. When I was young, I almost every had some time with my neighbors.
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>> Living in the present is much more challenging because these days, it is harder to find a job than in the past.
So most people try to everything harder.
>> So, most people always try their best and even tries harder.
Also, on my experiences, although whenever I have exam I did my best, results were not satisfied.
6. Tourism has changed over the decades.
>> Also, with the experiences I had, whenever I had an exam and even though I always do my best, the result is always not satisfying for me.
>> Correct.
It\'s because nowadays, technology is developed and there are many new places, so tourist attraction increased.
>> It\'s because nowadays, technology is developed and there are many new places to visit. So tourist attractions increased.
Also, thanks to development of technology, transportation like trains or planes was also developed.So my neighbors and I gradually apart.
>> Also, thanks to the development of technology, transportation like trains or planes were also developed.
1. While I was close with my neighbors when I was young, now each have lots of things to do.
>> I was close to my neighbors when I was young, but we parted ways when we got busy.
However, there are school friends in my neighborhood, keeping our relationship.
>> I have school friends though who are also in my neighborhood, so we kept in touch.
2. I came this neighborhood when I was 9. It is very long time, but little awkward each other.
>> I came to this neighborhood when I was 9. It is very long time, but we still feel a little awkward whenever we see each other.
Next door neighbors are still close with me. When I was young, I almost every had some time with my neighbors.
>> My next door neighbors are still close to me. When I was younger, I almost always spend time with my neighbors.
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