Foreign language (part1)
학생이 쓴 원문
Does you school take a foreign language course? Our school takes a foreign language course. We take an English language course.It\'s not that bad.we do English everybody.In our school,first graders to sixth graders learn English.But in my old school,we learned English when we were third grade.Plus,The English course was too easy.But in our school,we take courses that are our level.I agree we should take a proper foreign language course like this, If you want to know why? read more! First, some foreign languages are very commonly known.For example,English! Many nations use English.So, if we know about a foreign language that is commonly known,it could be very useful when we go to another nation.Scond,you can read and understand more stories.l read Harry Potter,and it\'s a good story.Reading this book by English and reading it by Koren was different. But,I think it was more fun when I read it in English.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Rose! Great to know that your school offers a foreign language course like English! Studying a new language is exciting.
T. Matt
Does you school take a foreign language course?
>>Does you school offer a foreign language course?
Our school takes a foreign language course.
>>Our school offers a foreign language course.
We take an English language course.
>>Correct
It\'s not that bad.
>>Correct
we do English everybody.
>> Everybody speaks English.
In our school,first graders to sixth graders learn English.
>>In our school, first graders to sixth graders learn English.
But in my old school, we learned English when we were third grade.
>>But in my old school, we learned English when we were in the third grade.
>> However, in my old school, we learned English when we were in the third grade.
Plus,The English course was too easy.
>>Correct
But in our school,we take courses that are our level.
>>But in our school, we take courses that are our within our level.
>>However, in our school, we take courses that are our within our level.
I agree we should take a proper foreign language course like this, If you want to know why? read more!
>> I agree that we should take a proper foreign language course like this, if you want to know why? Read more!
First, some foreign languages are very commonly known.
>>Correct
For example,English!
>>Correct
Many nations use English.
>>Correct
So, if we know about a foreign language that is commonly known,it could be very useful when we go to another nation.
>>Correct
Scond,you can read and understand more stories.
>>Second, you can read and understand more stories.
l read Harry Potter,and it\'s a good story.
>>Correct
Reading this book by English and reading it by Koren was different.
>>Reading this book in English and reading it in Korean was different.
But,I think it was more fun when I read it in English.
>>Correct
>>However, I think it was more fun when I read it in English.
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