Foreign language (part2)
학생이 쓴 원문
The author, J.K.Roling wrote the novel by English,so I think I could understand the author\'s feeling better when I read it in English.Third, I can watch many kinds of videos,I see a video channel.I like sis vs bro. It is fun and interesting .I can watch many kinds of videos because I know a commonly known language. Now,do you understand why l agree that all elementary school students should be required to take a foreign language course? But I prefer an English course. What do you think?
강사 첨삭
Hello Rose. Here is the second part of your corrections. Have a good day ahead!
T. Matt
The author, J.K.Roling wrote the novel by English,so I think I could understand the author\'s feeling better when I read it in English.
>>The author, J.K.Rowling wrote the novel in English, so, I think I could understand the author\'s feeling better when I read it in English.
Third, I can watch many kinds of videos, I see a video channel.
>>Third, I can watch many kinds of video or video channels.
I like sis vs bro.
>>Correct
>> I like watching Sis Vs. Bro.
It is fun and interesting .
>>Correct
I can watch many kinds of videos because I know a commonly known language.
>>Correct
Now,do you understand why l agree that all elementary school students should be required to take a foreign language course?
>>Correct
But I prefer an English course.
>>Correct
>>However, I prefer an English course.
What do you think?
>>Correct
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