foreign student
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes problems happen that many universities accept too permissive foreign students.
A representative example is that universities accept foreign students even they could not speak Korean.
The reason is only one to gain money using foreign student..
The number of bad Chinese students is increasing even in the other country .
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
Did you know that some countries open tourism and migration becuase the population is declining? They have their own ways and methods now to keep the economy alive by being lenient or less strict with foreigners.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
Sometimes problems happen that many universities accept too permissive foreign students.
>>> Sometimes problems happen when many universities accept too permissive foreign students.
A representative example is that universities accept foreign students even they could not speak Korean.
>> A representative example is that universities accept foreign students even though they could not speak Korean.
The reason is only one to gain money using foreign student..
>> The reason is only one to gain money by using foreign students..
The number of bad Chinese students is increasing even in the other country .
>>> The number of bad Chinese students is increasing even in other countries.
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