Foreign tourists must be charged higher fees than local people to visit cultural places and historic
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Nowadays, many people are willing to spend their money on travelling abroad.
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However there are places where tourists pay more fees than local people, so it is controversial whether this situation is desirable.
>>However, there are places where tourists pay more fees than local people, so it is controversial whether this situation is desirable.
In my opinion, I disagree with the topic.
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High cost is likely to cause a decrease in the number of tourists.
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Most travelers are disappointed in countries where they visit because of the unfair policy.
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According to a survey, people who have a bad memory in a nation do not want to go the same place.
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This situation makes the nations’ income reduce.
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Therefore, I think charged fees should be lower than local people rather.
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Many visitors can have a chance to go more cultural and historical sites.
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