Foreign tourists must be charged higher fees than local people to visit cultural places and historic
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I definitely admire your logical idea, Jason!
I can totally feel it in our country since the price of goods here is definitely cheaper TT
See you later!
I partly agree with this question.
>>CORRECT!
First, if tourists pay high costs for site seeing, the area will be improved by the local people since they want to earn more from the traveller thus they will make services more.
>> First, if tourists pay high costs for site seeing, the area will be improved by the local people since they want to earn more from the traveller thus they will make services more convenient.
Second, few people who journey oversees throw garages everywhere.
>>Second, few people who travel overseas throw garbage everywhere.
Accordingly, local people should hire a person who cleans and maintains their area every single day.
>>CORRECT!
On the other hand, if they don’t pay a lot, the tourists will be increased visiting there since they think all the things are cheaper than their country.
>> On the other hand, if they don’t pay a lot, the number of tourists visiting there will be increased since they think all the things are cheaper than in their country.
Hence, they might pay a lot even if natives didn’t increase a price of their goods.
>>Hence, they might pay a lot even if natives didn’t increase the price of their goods.
However, it might be increased existing a lot of problems such as violence, rape, prostitution and crimes since a person who likes to drink will drink a lot owing to the lower price of the alcohol.
>>However, a lot of existing problems such as violence, rape, prostitution, and crimes might increase since a person who likes to drink will drink a lot owing to the lower price of the alcohol.
So I don’t have any specific idea for this statement
>>Therefore, I don’t have any specific idea for this statement.
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