Foreigners in my country
학생이 쓴 원문
Even though there are many foreigners in my University, I don\'t have any friend from another country. Because I stayed in Australia for 6 months, of course I have many friends in Australia but not in Korea. So, I just applied for a program that I can help exchange students of my university in this semester. I took an interview to be accepted and finally, I made it. An orientation of this program was supposed to be held this week, but because of Corona Virus, it was canceled and I only received their phone number. This semester will be started in 3 weeks and since then, there will be several missions that I have to do with them. Anyway, I am looking forward to meeting them. I will do my best to help them to get by well in Korea.
강사 첨삭
1. Even though there are many foreigners in my University, I don\'t have any friend from another country.
>>Even though there are many foreigners in my university, I don\'t have any friends from another country.
>>Even though there are many foreigners in my university, I don\'t have any friends from another country.
2. Because I stayed in Australia for 6 months, of course I have many friends in Australia but not in Korea.
>>Since I stayed in Australia for 6 months, of course, I have many friends there but not in Korea.
>>Since I stayed in Australia for 6 months, of course, I have many friends there but not in Korea.
3. So, I just applied for a program that I can help exchange students of my university in this semester.
>>So, I just applied for a program where I can help exchange students of my university in this semester.4. I took an interview to be accepted and finally, I made it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I took an interview for it and I got accepted.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I took an interview for it and I got accepted.
5. An orientation of this program was supposed to be held this week, but because of Corona Virus, it was canceled and I only received their phone number.
>>The orientation of this program was supposed to be held this week, but because of Corona Virus, it was canceled and I only received their phone number.6. This semester will be started in 3 weeks and since then, there will be several missions that I have to do with them.
>>This semester will start in 3 weeks and from then on, there will be several missions that I have to do with them.
>>This semester will start in 3 weeks and from then on, there will be several missions that I have to do with them.
7. Anyway, I am looking forward to meeting them.
>>Anyway, I am looking forward to meet them.
>>Anyway, I am looking forward to meet them.
8. I will do my best to help them to get by well in Korea.
>>CORRECT
>>I will do my best to help them cope well in Korea.
>>CORRECT
>>I will do my best to help them cope well in Korea.
That\'ll be greet!
- T. Melody ^^
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